I was learning to: write an autobiography about me. I made sure I used heaps of adjectives and verbs to add impact.
This work shows that I am using the right vocabulary and paragraphs in the right places.
I tried to use as many adjectives as I could. I can improve my ending with more impact.
PUBLISHED WRITING
Monday the 21st of March
Its pretty cool being the middle in the family because you get the best of both worlds. If you don't want to try something you can get your older brother to do it for you to see what happens but sometimes I have to go first to prove that I'm capable!
My name is Frederico. I am 12 years old, I live on a peaceful farm in the Wairarpa with 2 brother and my mum Kate and my dad Russ.
I am very passionate about my hobbies which include crutching, skiing, duck shooting, athletics, long distance running, motorbike riding, flying and triathlons. I love most sports and am willing to give anything a try,'
On our farm we live in a fast and efficient lifestyle; everybody chips in to make jobs easier. Every weekend my brothers and I do some sort of activities to keep us occupied. In the week days I go to Alfredton School. It's a small rural school with a population of 60 off kids.
I am currently in Year 8 and am off to Wairarapa College next year to start a new chapter of my life. I will be boarding and will keep going right through to Y13.
When I leave school I plan to get a pilot license and be a legendary All Black.
When I retire I will be a farmer and fly planes in my spare time.
DRAFT WRITING
